Has great characters, but story falls flat.

So far, there are few characters that are well built, but the story drags everything down. For example, the FL character is one of the best I have seen; she is strong and smart, but not so good that she can do everything on her own. I think the main actors give stellar performances. The story would be better if it did not try to include comedy, or if comedy was done better. The comedy scenes do not mesh well with the story; they feel out of place.