I get that it was a low budget production and that the production company was probably quite small but even so there were quite a few annoyances for me.

Mainly, if you are going to call your show 'My Keychain', the part of the story revolving around said keychains should probably be clear and easy to follow. When Tin took both bags home and untangled the keychains the dog one was furthest from the camera. Then when he opened the bags he opened the one furthest from the camera and was nosily looking through the other guys stuff, and the next scene the other guy is saying the dog keychain bag isn't his. If you're going to swap the bags positions in between the shots please at least have the keychains in focus. I went back to double check and they're so blurry I can hardly tell which bag hes going through. Because it was unclear I spent the next episode confused as to why the other guy was saying the dog keychain bag wasn't his.

Story - ???

Acting - The way the other guy looked at Tin when they'd literally only just met was weird. It made me squirm in discomfort + I listened to more awkward pauses in between words than I did actual words

Music - There were sooo many unnecessary sound effects. If there had been 2/3 less I might have found them funny